What they don't tell you about selling benefits


"Sell the benefits, not the features!"

You know, it's funny.

Every copywriter has been told this before. Yet most of us weren't told how to sell the benefits.

And as a result, people don't see results even when they think they've sold the benefits.

"Benefits give people a reason to buy!"

It's almost like the people telling us this are trying to sell us something.

They tell us the what ("sell the benefits") and the why ("it gives people a reason to buy"), but never the how.

So that's what today's letter will teach you – how to sell the benefits.

One Core Concept You Must Understand

Humans act based on emotions.

We can have all the reasons in the world to do something, but sometimes we won't if we don't feel like doing it.

I can give a morbidly obese person all the reasons to lose their big ol' belly:

  • Feel 100x better every day
  • Get dates with all the hotties
  • Buy clothes you don't need to get tailor-made
  • Stop your heart from having an early retirement
  • Run for more than 5 minutes without needing a bottle of oxygen

Those should be good enough reasons for someone to lose weight, right?

Wrong.

You see, people think they're special.

They think "Yeah it works for them but it probably won't for me"

So, my friend, it's your job to prove to them they can do it.

And no, I'm not talking about the traditional form of social proof like testimonials and case studies.

While those are highly effective (if not the most effective) and you should always include social proof whenever you're selling…

There's something else you can do to spice up your benefits…

And that, my friend, is

Storytelling

Or, in this case, storyselling.

Now, don't get me wrong.

Bullets are great to use (especially for info-products), but when you're trying to solve a deep, dark, pain that keeps your audience awake at night, then you need to sell a transformation.

Before I give you examples, I want you to first understand why storyselling is so effective.

Well, my friend, allow me to explain.

Why Stories Work So Well

Humans make sense of the world through stories.

Stories are one of the ultimate forms of persuasion.

Look at all the world's biggest leaders:

  • Jesus
  • Gandhi
  • Muhammed

Even real-life supervillains:

  • Hitler
  • Jim Jones
  • Osama Bin Laden

They all gained their cult-like following through stories.

Because here's the funny thing about humans…

Whenever we hear stories, we picture ourselves doing all the actions we hear the character doing.

The movie Top Gun, starring Tom Cruise, was released in 1986.

In a nutshell, the movie is about a talented Navy pilot who joins an elite fighter pilot school to prove himself. He's faced with all sorts of challenges, learns a lot of lessons, and ultimately becomes an icon in the fighter jet world.

The movie is fictional.

And because of its incredible storytelling, it caused a massive spike in Navy recruitment.

Young men saw that movie and said "Yeah, I'm putting my life towards being a fighter pilot now."

But that's not even the crazy part.

What's wild is the fact that nowhere in the movie did it promote the Navy. It didn't say "hey come join us to be as cool as Maverick!"

("Maverick" was the nickname of the main character, played by Tom Cruise).

Okay, back to the copywriting world before I convince you to join the Navy (otherwise who will read these letters and learn some kick-ass ways to write better copy?)

So, if you want to make the benefits of your product a helluva lot better, turn them into a story.

Back to the morbidly obese person example.

Rather than saying:

"Lose 20lb in 12 weeks without giving up your favourite foods!"

I could give a story about someone who did it.

The important thing here though is not to focus on what they did, but who they are.

You need your reader to relate to the main character of the story.

If you said "John was fat but after this program he became fit," then you might as well be saying that to a wall.

But if you said something like:

My friend here, John, started this new fitness program recently.

His family doubted he'd make any progress because he loves Netflix (his favourite series is Breaking Bad), he loves ordering a pizza every week, and he loves having a piece of chocolate every night before bed.

Hell, he even doubted himself.

After all, he weighed 250 pounds and never exercised before!

But he quickly silenced his family and even his inner voice after he lost a whopping 30lbs in just 12 weeks!

And 12 weeks after that, he was unrecognisable compared to what we were just 6 months prior – a completely different man with a completely different life, all for the better!

The crazy part is, he didn't give up Netflix, pizza, or his late-night chocolate mini feasts. Here's how…

Boom.

That's off the top of my head, but you can see how it feels a lot more personal. A lot more relatable. A lot more persuasive.

You can still include a list of bullets at the end to recap what exactly they'll get from your product.

In fact, I recommend you do.

Anyway, that's all for today.

'preciate you reading, amigo.

– Kyle "Sell the stories" Magnier

P.S. – If you haven't already, check out this quick thread I made if you want to learn the fundamentals of copywriting (or if you want a nice refresher) in just 27 sentences.

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